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I Deserve More Than You~I Deserve More Than You
Sung to the tune of Taylor Swift's The Way I Loved You. (Some parts repeated, some twisted a bit.)

Dear Kali, Meilah,

I remember when you were my only friends
and we were there for each other.

and then it changed.

Oh but,
you left me all alone
to cry, cause I didn't know
that you'd be looking for revenge.
But...
not like I could care less.

Cause I am happier now that you're gone!
And personally, this was not my loss.
Spread those lies, if you want.
But I DESERVE MORE THAN YOU!
Cause I'm done crying over you,
now that I know the things that you SAID I do
So go on and leave,
neither of us care.
So lea

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holy-
okay, here, have my improvements and character developments of Lilli over the past year, when I first made her to now
well then
dghsgfjhsfgkfdhg more no pen pressure work yay
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Lilli is miiiine
art is miiiine
world is miiiiine
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Critique by *pugofpower Feb 5, 2013, 7:16:55 PM
Wow this is great! At first glance I can see a world of a difference in everything!!! You did a wonderful job improving hair, and just really everything!

This is going to be a short critique (like half the size of my normal monster ones!) but I must say I am dumb founded by the improvement!

Positives:
You really seems to develope a style! The first pic almost seems mimicky, but the second one looks hard worked! You got great flow on her hair, and very slim and cute shoulders!

Negatives:
As I see you pulled off such improvement now I can only imagine how much you can improve by maybe even December 2013! I see you are going quite along the lines of an anime like style, so what I say is based off of that but your style is up to you ;v;

Maybe shrink the chin a little bit? It is quite jutty and sticks out apart from the pic. At first glance it could be a bit distracting. The neck is also some what coming from the side of her face? Maybe make it not so much of an hour glass shape and place it a bit more to the back of her head? Not to mention smooth out your lines a little more, and maybe start working with various colored shades rather than black and white?

Besides those few little things, you did a wonderful job! :heart:
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Critique by ~Arcanine1999 Dec 8, 2012, 11:42:05 PM
I think it's a grat drawing showing how much you have improved and this is a huge difference from 1 year ago, but of course there is always room for improvement my only major thing about this is the chin seems a little pointy and kind of low down if you we're to smooth it out it would be all the more amazing and I'm not as good as I think but I believe that is something that could pointed out but like I said other then that this is fantastic and you have real talent I look forward to seeing more of your work! ~AH
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*shaina773 Dec 13, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
This is so amazing! <3 Soo much improvement! I love how you do eyes and hair :3
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*animatednovelist Dec 24, 2012  Student General Artist
Thank you Shaina <33
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*shaina773 Dec 24, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
No problem!
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*p-i-c-k-l-e-s Dec 11, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
holy akhjsdfl
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*animatednovelist Dec 12, 2012  Student General Artist
hsjfdhsgkjfdhg what
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*p-i-c-k-l-e-s Dec 12, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
just

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so much

improvement
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*animatednovelist Dec 13, 2012  Student General Artist
dfjkhsfksg right?
this is like
overwhelming
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*p-i-c-k-l-e-s Dec 13, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
asjdhf

yes
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Mood: Wow! ~SparkleStudiosDC Dec 10, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
woah
this is so cool :D
it's weird how during the time with the scribbly drawing i could draw better than that scribbles cause i was actually an artist already back then, (like realistic sketches ALREADY :P) bit now you like CAUGHT UP AND GOT BETTER THAN ME HAHAHAHAHAAAAAIIIEEE.
I'm so proud of you :3
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~STlCKY Dec 9, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Improvement XD <3 try to keep the chin a little smaller ^^
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